Moving on...
Apr. 28th, 2006 12:05 pmSo, I've already started chapter seventeen of Dark Roses. I've got about the first, oh, two paragraphs down, but I was just wondering what everyone thought. I'm not so sure qabout them, so feedback makes me happy.
It's a filler chap, so the basic plot of it is, well, kind of Calix and Beast becoming friends. And some about Regali's boyfriend. And beginning to clear up a couple of loopholes in the New Revolution (as the movements in Vanderwood and the city are now being called).
So here it is...
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So, yeah. There's the beginning of it. I kinda like it, but I'm not so sure, so tell me what y'all think.
I'm also stuck on a title for the chapter. I'm thinking something along the lines of 'animal' or something, as as you may have noticed, each title kind of sums up the theme of the chapter.
Also, I'm always on the lookout for a better title of the story itself, so if any of you have any ideas, I'd welcome them greatly.
nebulia out.
It's a filler chap, so the basic plot of it is, well, kind of Calix and Beast becoming friends. And some about Regali's boyfriend. And beginning to clear up a couple of loopholes in the New Revolution (as the movements in Vanderwood and the city are now being called).
So here it is...
( Read more... )
So, yeah. There's the beginning of it. I kinda like it, but I'm not so sure, so tell me what y'all think.
I'm also stuck on a title for the chapter. I'm thinking something along the lines of 'animal' or something, as as you may have noticed, each title kind of sums up the theme of the chapter.
Also, I'm always on the lookout for a better title of the story itself, so if any of you have any ideas, I'd welcome them greatly.
nebulia out.