I sound my barbaric YAWP!

so..wrote a lot of dark roses tongiht, but the chapter's not quite done. i thought i'd post on of my favorite parts right now, though, and see what you think. if you know the story, these are characters i haven't visited in a while, and you get to see some of their inner thoughts. also, definitely rated pg-13 for a some pretty heavy sexual references. these are two seperate parts of the chapter. w00t.

anywho, here it is...
( Chapter )

OK, some italicized stuff in there that I didn't HTML, so there's no emphsis where there should be, but I think you guys get the drift.
I *heart* concrit!

nebulia out.